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or

forever

hold

their

peace.)

——對于沒有這個婚俗的其他地方，簡直沒可能翻譯出原句的意思。

第七行的“每一艘漂泊/迷航之船的指引之星”(the

star

to

every

wandering

bark)中的‘the

star’是指北極星(Poris

=

guiding

star)，中文譯本里一般都譯作“恒星”或“星斗”未免不夠準確。意大利文譯本里則直接譯出了

“指引之星”的意思(è

stel-guida

di

ogni

sperduta

barca)。

4

十四行詩第75首

第22節里柯特在貝爾尼尼的羅馬少年雕像前提到的詩句：

“無意占有或追尋其他的歡愉，除了那些你已給的，或將施的?！币痪涑鲎陨勘葋喪男性姷?5首。這是一首體現親密關系中種種負面情感的詩作（與第116首的極端理想化的愛情正好相反）。詩里將對愛人的沉迷與對食物的食欲和對財富的貪婪聯系起來，使用了大量頗有情^色意義的詞語("enjoyer",

"treasure",

"pursuing",

"possessing",

"had"

"feasting")

，暗喻對應七宗重罪中的五種：貪婪，暴食，傲慢，色/欲和嫉妒。因此在這里更談不上很好地翻譯，只是講個大概意思，完全無法傳達原詩在詞語選擇上的微妙之處：

*

*

*

SO

75

So

are

you

to

my

thoughts

as

food

to

life,

Or

as

sweet-season'd

showers

are

to

the

ground;

And

for

the

peace

of

you

I

hold

such

strife

As

'twixt

a

miser

and

his

wealth

is

found;

Now

proud

as

an

enjoyer

and

anon

Doubting

the

filg

age

will

steal

his

treasure,

Now

tio

be

with

you

alone,

Theer'd

that

the

world

may

see

my

pleasure;

Sometime

all

full

with

feasting

on

yht

And

by

and

by

starved

for

a

look;

Possessing

or

pursuing

no

delight,

Save

what

is

had

or

must

from

you

be

took.

Thus

do

I

pine

and

surfeit

day

by

day,

luttoning

on

all,

or

all

away.

你之于我思緒，如同食物之于生命，

又如那甜美四月的春雨之于大地；

我竭力想從你那里獲得安心，

好像守財奴對他財產的心理：

一時作為主人而得意享用，

一時又怕時間竊賊偷走他